Check the new track i made :)

Hey there.

I just wanted some feedback on the new track that i made. What is good and what can be done better? Im not a producer, and im doing the best mastering I can.

The track needs singing aswell, and im currently looking for people who wants to make vocals on my tracks.

What do you think? :)

https://soundcloud.com/caponi14/condecending-undone

Moved the thread to a more appropriate sub forum! Also, nice work ;)